I love how you have written your task description, you have improved in your writing. I also love how you have written that you were having a great time with your family.
What was your favorite part in your holidays? Did you enjoy cleaning up in the house?
I liked reading your holiday writing your gettting good at making your writing interesting you made some mistakes in it but I hope you bolg more bye.
What day did you like the most in your holiday? What kind of games did you play with your sibings? What kind of food did you eat when you went to the movies?
Hi Maisey,
ReplyDeleteI love how you have written your task description, you have improved in your writing. I also love how you have written that you were having a great time with your family.
What was your favorite part in your holidays?
Did you enjoy cleaning up in the house?
Kia Ora Maisey.
ReplyDeleteI liked reading your holiday writing your gettting good at making your writing interesting you made some mistakes in it but I hope you bolg more bye.
What day did you like the most in your holiday?
What kind of games did you play with your sibings?
What kind of food did you eat when you went to the movies?